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Writer's pictureBill Combs

The Elephant’s Song (A Short Story)


Ethan Pierce sat in his office, surrounded by books and papers, staring at his computer screen with an intensity that made his eyes ache. His mind spun, searching for answers in the reams of data before him. For decades, he had devoted himself to the pursuit of scientific knowledge, dissecting the natural world into its smallest components in an attempt to unlock the secrets of life. He had built his career on precision and logic, thriving in the clarity that science offered. Yet, for all his achievements, none of it had prepared him for this.


The diagnosis had come six months ago. A rare and degenerative neuromuscular disease had taken root in his body, eroding his strength with each passing day. The prognosis was grim: a few years left, at best. His doctors had been blunt. No cure existed. There was no protocol, no treatment plan that could halt the disease’s progression. Ethan’s once-strong hands, the same hands that had so carefully manipulated microscopes and lab instruments, now trembled as he tried to type. The very foundation of his life—his body, his health, and his ability to control his future—was crumbling.


For months, he had refused to accept defeat. If there was a solution, science would provide it. Ethan plunged into research with a fervor that bordered on obsession. He devoured medical journals, consulted with leading neurologists, and explored the cutting edge of experimental treatments. But no matter how hard he searched, no matter how many studies he poured over, the answer eluded him. Science had brought him to the precipice, but it could not save him.


He felt as though he were one of the six blind men from the ancient Indian parable, each trying to understand an elephant by touching only a part of it. The man who grasped the tail thought the elephant was like a rope, while the one who felt its side believed it to be a wall. Each had a limited perspective, unable to see the full picture. Ethan realized, with a deepening sense of frustration, that he had spent his entire life clinging to his piece of the elephant—science—and now it was failing him.


One evening, after an exhausting day of research that yielded no results, Ethan found himself at a public lecture on environmental sustainability. It wasn’t directly related to his work, but he hoped that shifting his focus might give him a momentary reprieve from his situation. The lecture was held at a local university, and the room was packed with academics, students, and activists. As the speaker droned on about carbon footprints and biodiversity, Ethan found his mind wandering, drifting back to his own problems.


When the lecture ended, Ethan began to gather his things, ready to slip out unnoticed, when a voice behind him said, “You’re Ethan Pierce, aren’t you?”

He turned to see a woman standing there, her eyes bright with curiosity. She was striking, with long, dark hair and an energy about her that seemed almost contagious.


“I am,” he replied, offering a polite smile. “Have we met?”


“No, but I attended your lecture at the World Science Summit last year. The one on synthetic ecosystems and genetic adaptation. It was fascinating.”


Ethan raised an eyebrow, surprised that anyone remembered that talk. “Thank you,” he said, unsure of what else to say.


“I’m Clara,” she continued, extending a hand. “I’ve always been interested in how science intersects with other forms of knowledge.”


Ethan shook her hand, feeling the warmth of her grip despite his own weakening strength. “Other forms of knowledge?” he asked, intrigued but wary.


Clara smiled. “Yes. I’m a holistic healer, and I’ve always believed that science and spirituality can work together to give us a fuller understanding of life. Like the blind men and the elephant, each of us only sees a part of the whole, but if we share our perspectives, we can build a clearer picture.”


Ethan frowned. “With all due respect, science is about evidence and measurable facts. I’m not sure what spirituality has to offer in that regard.”


Clara’s smile didn’t waver. “I know that’s how it seems. But maybe science has its limits, too. You’ve spent your life studying one part of the elephant, but that doesn’t mean the rest of it doesn’t exist.”


The analogy hit Ethan harder than he wanted to admit. It was a familiar metaphor, one he had dismissed as overly simplistic. Yet here it was, challenging him in the midst of his deepest struggle. “I’m not sure I see the connection,” he said, his voice clipped.


Clara didn’t press. Instead, she said, “Maybe we could talk more sometime. I’d love to hear your thoughts on it.”


Ethan nodded politely, though he had no intention of following up. “Perhaps,” he said, before making his exit.


But Clara seemed to have a way of finding him. Over the next few weeks, they crossed paths at various events and coffee shops, and each time they spoke, she challenged him—gently, but persistently. She never pushed too hard, but she had a way of weaving the metaphor of the elephant into their conversations, always suggesting that there was more to life than what he could measure.


It irritated Ethan at first. He prided himself on being grounded in the real, the tangible. But Clara’s perspective—though it was rooted in ideas he found difficult to accept—began to chip away at his certainty. She spoke of energy fields, ancient healing practices, and the connection between mind, body, and spirit. It was all so foreign to him, so utterly outside the realm of anything he had ever considered, that it was easier to dismiss it.


And yet, for reasons he couldn’t quite explain, he didn’t entirely walk away. There was something about Clara’s view of the world that intrigued him, as much as it frustrated him.


One afternoon, after another conversation that left Ethan feeling unsettled, Clara said something that struck a chord. “You know,” she said, as they sat in a small café, “the blind men could have spent their entire lives arguing about what the elephant was like. But if they’d just shared what they knew—if they’d been willing to listen to each other—they might have seen the whole animal. Healing is kind of like that. We each have a part of the truth, but unless we’re open to other perspectives, we’ll never see the full picture.”


Ethan stared into his coffee, her words resonating more deeply than he wanted to admit. “But what if the other perspectives are just… wrong?” he asked.

“Wrong, or just different?” Clara countered gently.


Ethan had no answer.


Weeks passed, and as his illness progressed, Ethan grew more desperate. His muscles continued to atrophy, his energy waned, and every scientific avenue he pursued led to a dead end. The sense of control he had always valued was slipping through his fingers. The weight of his condition began to crush him, and in his darkest moments, he found himself remembering Clara’s words.


One evening, exhausted and defeated, Ethan found himself calling her. He wasn’t sure what he hoped to gain—maybe just someone to talk to who wasn’t going to remind him of his grim prognosis.


“Clara, I’m not sure I believe in all this… alternative stuff,” he said as they sat across from each other in her living room, “but I don’t know what else to do.”


She studied him for a moment, her expression soft. “You don’t have to believe,” she said. “You just have to be open. Let’s start there.”


That night, Clara guided him through a series of meditations. Ethan felt foolish at first, sitting cross-legged with his eyes closed, trying to focus on his breathing. But Clara’s voice was calm and steady, and little by little, his skepticism began to melt away. He felt a peace he hadn’t known in months, a quiet in the storm that had become his mind.


Over the next few weeks, Clara introduced him to other practices—acupuncture, herbal remedies, and energy work. Ethan approached it all with caution, still clinging to his need for evidence. But something unexpected began to happen. Though his body remained weak, there were subtle changes. His mind, once consumed by fear and doubt, began to clear. His stress lessened. He started sleeping better.


Clara’s methods didn’t promise a cure, and she never claimed they would. But what she offered was a different way of understanding his illness. Rather than viewing it as something to be defeated through force and logic, she encouraged Ethan to see it as part of a larger picture—a picture he hadn’t been able to grasp before.


As his perspective shifted, so did his relationship with Clara. What had started as an unlikely friendship began to deepen into something more. He found himself drawn to her, not just because of her unshakable optimism, but because she saw the world in a way he had never allowed himself to.


In time, Ethan’s doctors began to notice changes too. His disease, though still present, seemed to have slowed its progression. It was as if something had clicked—a combination of medical treatment, holistic practices, and perhaps, as Clara had suggested, his willingness to open his mind.


One afternoon, as they sat together in the park, Ethan looked at Clara and asked, “Do you really think I’m getting better?”


She smiled, her eyes warm. “I think you’re healing, Ethan. Whether that means you’ll fully recover, I don’t know. But healing isn’t just about the body. It’s about your mind, your spirit, and the way you choose to live.”


He nodded slowly, understanding for the first time what she meant. It wasn’t about proving one viewpoint right and the other wrong. It was about seeing the whole elephant—about sharing what each of them knew and expanding their understanding of life.


As the weeks turned into months, Ethan found himself growing stronger, though his disease remained. The question of whether he would survive no longer consumed him. He had found something more important—a sense of peace, a willingness to embrace the unknown, and a connection to Clara that filled his life with meaning.


Whether he would ultimately beat the disease was uncertain. But as Ethan walked beside Clara, feeling the warmth of the sun on his skin and the soft breeze against his face, he realized that survival was only one part of the picture. Healing, in all its forms, was the true journey.


And for the first time since his diagnosis, Ethan believed that journey might just lead him to a place he hadn’t imagined—a place of wholeness, not defined by illness or cure, but by the fullness of life itself.



If you enjoyed this story and it's message, let me know. I am thinking about publishing more in story form over the next several months, and wanted to gauge interest in having these interspersed with informational blog posts.

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Sep 14

I heard this elephant story decades ago in David Roth's song, Five Blind Men. Always a good reminder. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e-YtNU6OYjU

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